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"Freedom is … the right to write the wrong words" – Patti Smith

  • To Prompt or Not To Prompt (and some handy prompts!)

    At Write Club we find that most of the time our teen writers want to come up with their own ideas and that they’re much more passionate about those ideas (and take them much further) than any that come from writing prompts and exercises. I find it much more beneficial to give a writer 5 minutes of quiet time to think of an idea than to give them a bunch of prompts.

    However.

    Prompts have their uses. Some writers love prompts. And sometimes you’re just feeling a bit stuck with a project and you want something new and low-stakes to tinker with. Sometimes you’re too tired from a whole day at school to think of an idea. Sometimes you want a springboard to launch an idea you already have. I’ve written whole novels in response to prompts. So we always have a few prompts at the ready for anyone who wants one.

    Where do we find these prompts? Well, one brilliant source that I like to use, is the last line of chapter 1 of the nearest novel to hand. 95% of the time, it’s a cracker.

    Why is that? It’s because the end of chapter 1 is very often a springboard into the story. We all know that the ‘inciting incident’ – the event that sets the story in motion – has to happen close to the start of the book. In children’s/YA books especially, this can very often be in chapter 1, because kids do not have time to hang around and wait for it.

    The last line will often be something like a cliffhanger or a hook or something intriguing or mysterious, something that makes you want to read on. They make excellent prompts.

    I usually provide 2 or 3 of them to choose from, and the writer can use them however they like. They can turn it into a story, poem, play, song lyrics… They can quote it directly, reword it, or just use it as inspiration for a place or character.

    They also have the added benefit of maybe encouraging your writers to go and read that book, so I always make sure they know which book the line came from.

    Try it, grab a few books and check out the last line of chapter 1. I guarantee you’ll find several that will make good prompts. And in the meantime, here are some good ones I’ve found recently.

     

    A whoop-whoop sound startles us, and blue lights flash in the rearview mirror. (The Hate You Give by Angie Thomas)

    I had the strangest feeling something or someone was waiting for me, right here at Knockmore. (Knock Back by Pauline Burgess)

    I got all the answers wrong. (Not my Problem by Ciara Smyth)

    I know this is going to sound strange, but would you mind being my girlfriend for the next five minutes? (Nick and Norah’s Infinite Playlist by Rachel Cohn and David Levithan)

    You see, the what ifs are as boundless as the stars. (Maggot Moon by Sally Gardner)

    His name was P.T. Barnum, and he’d been looking for a mermaid. (The Mermaid by Christina Henry)

    It’s quite rare to find someone who sees the same world you see. (Turtles all the way down by John Green)

    Four hands were immediately laid upon me, and I was borne upstairs. (Jane Eyre by Charlotte Bronte)

    Covered in blood, with his neck bent at a horribly wrong angle and his eyes wide open, staring at nothing. (Two Can Keep a Secret by Karen M McManus)

    FREDDIE IS BACK FROM FRANCE AND I THINK TONIGHT IS THE NIGHT! (Lobsters by Tom Ellen and Lucy Ivison)

    And then the first drops of rain began to fall. (The View on the Way Down by Rebecca Wait)

    I’m still spitting up bits of sausage when I hear the loud rap at the door. (Taking Flight by Sheena Wilkinson)

    But the noise is everywhere. (Are We All Lemmings and Snowflakes? by Holly Bourne)

    All he’s heard are the rumours, stories, the speculation, and the swiftly lost words of whispered secrets, about the island where people have started to live forever. (Midwinterblood by Marcus Sedgwick)

    Her second birth was the day the Watcher took her as its host. (Eliza and Her Monsters by Francesca Zappia)

    One more’ll make no difference. (The Watch House by Bernie McGill)

     

    In other news, my new YA novel, Little Bang, was published this month by Walker Books and we had a fabulous launch party at The Crescent Arts Centre. You can find out more about the novel here!

     

  • It’s The Most Wonderful Time… etc

    Seriously, I am such a Christmas fan my husband has literally banned me from singing Christmas Carols before 1st December (counting the days…!) 

    All memes for this post will be Elf-themed.

    My top 3 things about Christmas are:

    1. Christmas Carols

    2. The Christmas Tree (and singing “Oh, Christmas Tree” all the way home from buying the Christmas Tree, obvs)

    3. Book shopping!

    I love choosing books for people (it was my favourite thing about working in the public library), so I was well up for Sarah Webb’s annual Book Elves shenanigans.

    Told you

    Every year the Book Elves spend a week recommending children’s books in all genres and for all ages. You can even ask them for a personal recommedation for someone you know! Just search for the #BookElves2023 on Twitter or Instagram to find loads of brilliant suggestions if you’re stuck for what to buy someone! And if you like what we do, why not sign up to be a Book Elf next year?

    (And yeah, it’s for children’s books, but I just want to point out that I buy my husband picture books all the time and he loves them. I did a whole thread about it here.)

    Technically, also an elf

    The display tables at Waterstones are great, but also don’t forget local writers! We have a great YA scene in NI at the moment (#NIYA) and #DiscoverIrishKidsBooks will lead you to many Irish gems.

    Enjoy your shopping, and Merry Christmas from the Book Elves!

     

  • Discover Irish Children’s Books

    If you’re looking for amazing books for children and young adults, the Carnegie Medal judges have done the work for you and published this year’s nomination lists!

    I’m very proud to say there are no less than 14 Irish books on these lists! So what better time to mention that award winning Irish author, reviewer, bookseller and all round powerhouse, Sarah Webb, is spearheading a campaign to promote books by Irish writers and illustrators.

    #DiscoverIrishKidsBooks came about when Sarah “increasingly realised that the Irish children’s top ten bestseller list rarely features ANY Irish books.”

    “There are around 350 published Irish children’s authors and illustrators, including those living and working in Ireland. That’s a lot of children’s authors and illustrators! We have our own Laureate na nÓg, Patricia Forde who writes in both Irish and English. 24% of book sales in Ireland are children’s books.

    But there is a problem. When asked, many children living in Ireland cannot name any children’s authors who are Irish or living in Ireland.

    Very few children’s authors and illustrators based in Ireland are appearing at book and arts festivals in Ireland, or in the Irish media. (It’s certainly not 24% of the event programming.)

    From March to the start of August 2023 – twenty weeks – only ten books by Irish children’s authors or illustrators charted in the top ten children’s books. There were 123 Irish authors  in the adult original fiction chart in the corresponding twenty weeks.”

    “Sarah hopes to fix this situation by bringing Irish children’s books and their authors and illustrators to the attention of young readers and their grown ups. She has brought together a crack team of children’s book experts to help.”

    And she wants your help! The #DiscoverIrishKidsBooks website has resources and tips that teachers, librarians, authors, parents, journalists, booksellers, publishers and festivals can use to raise awareness of Irish books for young people. You can make a big difference in very simple ways. Is your library highlighting Irish writing? Is your school inviting Irish authors? Is your local bookshop/giftshop/museum/airport stocking Irish books? If not, could you bring the campaign to their attention? Are your relatives asking what the kids want for Christmas? Could you suggest some great quality Irish books instead of the usual celebrity-authored stuff on the shelves in Tesco? There are lots of tips on the website for how to Be An Irish Children’s Book Champion.

    Why is it important? Because “you have to see it to be it.” Children need to see that people just like them can be writers, illustrators and creatives of all kinds. And they need to see characters like them, in towns like theirs, in the books they read to know that their own stories are worth telling.

    If you’ve ever been in a creative writing class with kids, you’ll have had the experience of watching almost every writer (no matter their nationality, ethnicity, or any disability) sit down and write a story about an able-bodied, white, American kid (or maybe an English one, but very rarely Northern Irish ones). Because that’s who they see in books. They think that’s who books are about. They think those are the stories worthy of being published.

    I couldn’t have named an Irish children’s writer when I was young. I’d certainly never met one, I’d never read anything set in Northern Ireland, and I was 35 before it occured to me to write something set in the places I knew best. I’d love that to be different for kids today.

    So please have a look at the brilliant website Sarah Webb and her crack team of book experts has set up and follow their progress on socials. The campaign is just getting started and we’d love you to be a part of it!

     

The Blank Page was created by Kelly McCaughrain, Children’s Writing Fellow for NI (2019-2021), as a support and resource for Librarians and Teachers running Creative Writing Groups in post-primary schools.

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